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I liked the concept of the story line and the developing relationships within but this story was so poorly edited I had no choice but to score this at 3 stars. What could have been a 5 star review gets lowered by the stops when you had to figure out what is going on because the sentencing in some areas were atrocius. These editing issues made the flow of the story choppy at best so I was left with no choice.

At first I didn't like Whitney I thought she was the spoiled rotten rich brat and Kalmin had an attitude as well that left ambivalence. I had to continue reading just to see if these characters improved. I was very happy to know that they they did improve. I also liked how they both denied that they had a relationship and that they would harm one another.


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The Other Pack edition by Erica Stanciu Literature Fiction eBooks Reviews

Story was good but poorly written. Seamed like it was rushed together without much grammar or spell check. Was difficult to get through.
ES has written another novel about sharpshooter. It is excellent read and thoroughly enjoyable. When humor is added to any novel whether funny or tongue in cheek then the novel instead of average moves upwards. This one does.....ER
I'm sorry but reading this book pissed me off. The author seriously needs to work on ALL of her writing skills. I thought the idea was pretty good (I have a serious weakness for werewolves) but the book was just depressing. I mean the love between Kal and Whitney seems to just appear from thin air, at first she isn't even sure she likes him then BAM true love. That's just one of the things that angers me the most. There is enough irritating twists in this book with absolutely no way to tie them in to drive one mad, and the GRAMMAR I usually don't have a problem with this type of thing but combined with the rest of the story it just served to annoy me further.
I admit that looking back over the this review there is a fair amount of rage (yeah just a little *shakes head at self*) but this book was lucky to get two stars which I mostly gave out of guilt for the bitchiness in this review and because I like werewolves. You might want to think over reading this book.
I really enjoyed reading this book. the.story line is great. there are however many spelling and grammar errors. I had a hard time reading parts of this book due to the errors and had to figure out what was suppose to written instead. as someone with dyslexia this is nerve wracking to do. fix the errors and you would get 5 stars from me. Thank you for writing this book.
Writing style was not totally to my liking and there were several missed errors by editor, but it was a good book. It held my interest and made me want to hurry to the end to see how things would end. I'd recommend it, just beware of the start as it seems childish, but it IS from the perspective of a young teenager.
I really liked the story and found I had a hard time putting it down to get work done. My real complaint though was the amount of errors in the book. It seemed that a spell checker was often used that changed words completely and was never checked. I would be interested in reading more of this series, but only if the other books in the series are better edited than this one was. With better editing and grammar I would have gladly given this a 5-star rating instead of 3.
it read really fast at first. it felt like things were going to fast. I enjoyed Kal and Whitney and all their friends. I take it the next book doesn't involve characters of this book.
I liked the concept of the story line and the developing relationships within but this story was so poorly edited I had no choice but to score this at 3 stars. What could have been a 5 star review gets lowered by the stops when you had to figure out what is going on because the sentencing in some areas were atrocius. These editing issues made the flow of the story choppy at best so I was left with no choice.

At first I didn't like Whitney I thought she was the spoiled rotten rich brat and Kalmin had an attitude as well that left ambivalence. I had to continue reading just to see if these characters improved. I was very happy to know that they they did improve. I also liked how they both denied that they had a relationship and that they would harm one another.